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JayGreen |
Gepost door JayGreen op vrijdag 31-08-2007 om 17:12:59 | |
Ay! My man Bluf told me about this site and I decided to try my luck here since people never comment anything on Finnish forums. Anyways, check out my myspace profile, listen to the tracks, and drop some feedback if u feel like it!
www.myspace.com/jaygreenmusic
One! -JAG |
aprofourz Ojajoh?! |
Gepost door aprofourz op vrijdag 31-08-2007 om 17:13:53 | |
http://www.myspace.com/jaygreenmusic
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Iminic DE LAUWREAAT |
Gepost door Iminic op vrijdag 31-08-2007 om 21:42:05 | |
What are all these guys (two) from Finland doing on this forum all of a sudden?
Your pronunciation is quite strange, it sounds a bit Scottish (perhaps a Finnish accent?). Your flow is okay, as is the beat.
Lyrically, you should, in my opinion, try to use multies (multi-syllable rhyming). These make your texts more difficult and it requires more 'rhyming skills'. ( EDIT: Oh, in other songs you use them. In that case, ignore this remark.)
Perhaps you could use more metaphors and/or comparisons.
EDIT: Happy Hour and Back in the City are nice.[ Dit bericht is gewijzigd door op 31-08-2007 @ 21:52:06 ]
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Brandt Nextschool |
Gepost door Brandt op vrijdag 31-08-2007 om 21:50:34 | |
back in the city is a nice track man
keep it up, pz
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JayGreen |
Gepost door JayGreen op zaterdag 01-09-2007 om 01:12:12 | |
Thanx for the comments! We just happened to find this site, and the reason we posted our tracks here is simply cuz the feedback on Finnish and Swedish forums is weak.. Can't blame a guy for tryin..
But yeah I know that my accent needs a bit of work, and I'm workin on it all the time, but Scottish?? Haha I guess Scottish rap could sound pretty cool And as for the multis and metaphors, that's also sumthin I'm workin on, and I actually got a few new tracks that I'll probably add to myspace as soon as I'm pleased with them, that might have a lil more what you're lookin for..
But like I said, thanx for the feedback, keep it comin! |
blufproductions we cant be stopped |
Gepost door blufproductions op zaterdag 01-09-2007 om 12:33:53 | |
Two fucking Finns, far away from home...
This forum is just great, keep them comments comming dudes!
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JayGreen |
Gepost door JayGreen op zaterdag 01-09-2007 om 16:53:41 | |
Up we go! Anyone? |
JayGreen |
Gepost door JayGreen op zondag 02-09-2007 om 15:30:12 | |
Don't sleep people! |
Hof van Jaeden Koning der Armen |
Gepost door Hof van Jaeden op zondag 02-09-2007 om 22:59:25 | |
Quote: Iminic schreef op 31-08-2007 @ 21:42
What are all these guys (two) from Finland doing on this forum all of a sudden?
Your pronunciation is quite strange, it sounds a bit Scottish (perhaps a Finnish accent?). Your flow is okay, as is the beat.
Lyrically, you should, in my opinion, try to use multies (multi-syllable rhyming). These make your texts more difficult and it requires more 'rhyming skills'. ( EDIT: Oh, in other songs you use them. In that case, ignore this remark.)
Perhaps you could use more metaphors and/or comparisons.
EDIT: Happy Hour and Back in the City are nice.
I agree with Iminic.. Stuff sounds nice. Accent needs some work as said before. Why aren't you rapping in Finnish? In a strange way I like a lot of rap in foreign languages I don't understand. Anyway, keep it up man..
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JayGreen |
Gepost door JayGreen op maandag 03-09-2007 om 16:06:44 | |
Thanx Dobleye! Well there's no specific reason as to why I don't rap in Finnish (I actually recorded my first Finnish track like a month ago), I just started out writing in English way back and somehow I feel more comfortable rhymin in English too... And I don't listen to a lot of Finnish rap either... But thanx for the comments, keep em comin ya heard! |
JayGreen |
Gepost door JayGreen op dinsdag 04-09-2007 om 22:54:03 | |
Gimmesummo! |
Hof van Jaeden Koning der Armen |
Gepost door Hof van Jaeden op woensdag 05-09-2007 om 01:50:31 | |
Quote: JayGreen schreef op 03-09-2007 @ 16:06
Thanx Dobleye! Well there's no specific reason as to why I don't rap in Finnish (I actually recorded my first Finnish track like a month ago), I just started out writing in English way back and somehow I feel more comfortable rhymin in English too... And I don't listen to a lot of Finnish rap either... But thanx for the comments, keep em comin ya heard!
Maybe is the fact that you don't listen to a lot of Finnish rap kind of a good thing. You can develop your own sound/style. Probably a reason for me to listen to foreign languages is that I don't understand the lyrics and therefore I can't critize that. You should check out some Dutch rap... Finnish probably sounds the same for me as Dutch sounds to you..
Some Dutch rappers/rapgroups are:
Opgezwolle
Blaxtar
I could name more, but don't know more links right now..
I think these guys might be interesting for their original sound. I could name a few other good emcees, but you probably won't understand a word the're rapping..[ Dit bericht is gewijzigd door op 05-09-2007 @ 02:02:58 ]
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JayGreen |
Gepost door JayGreen op woensdag 05-09-2007 om 15:59:29 | |
Yeah but I'm still gonna stick to English, at least for now..
But yeah I'll check out the dutch MC's, never heard dutch rap before. Keep it comin! |
Brandt Nextschool |
Gepost door Brandt op donderdag 06-09-2007 om 01:04:52 | |
personally dont like blaxtar, if you want to hear more dutch hiphop just ask and ill drop some
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Hof van Jaeden Koning der Armen |
Gepost door Hof van Jaeden op donderdag 06-09-2007 om 01:11:00 | |
I'm not the biggest fan of Blaxtar either, but he has his own original sound so that's more interesting for someone who doesn't speak Dutch. [ Dit bericht is gewijzigd door op 06-09-2007 @ 01:11:17 ]
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TLP |
Gepost door TLP op donderdag 06-09-2007 om 01:32:37 | |
i'll hit you with my feedback in the moarning..
but if you want to check out some NL HIPHOP
check out my compilation CD
http://rapidshare.com/files/53661872/TLP__Compilatie_CD.rar
30 tracks..all dutch hiphop with banging beats!
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TLP |
Gepost door TLP op donderdag 06-09-2007 om 10:19:17 | |
the first track...the flows are niceeeeeeeeee guys (Y)
close to perfect match with the beat which is also dope!
im not having any problems with your english and pronounciation.
another day; ghehe i feel ya on the subject mang
maybe the chorus could be tighter..but the lyrics in the verses are head on.
Inevitable hustle; my kinda beat!!!makes me think of sabac (member of Non Phixion )this track. yeah str8 hotness this!my favorite yet of your myspace.
happy hour; hot on the rhymes!beat simple but it does the trick..chorus ill!
nice trackzzz mangg
plz return the favour and check out my "Compilation CD"
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JayGreen |
Gepost door JayGreen op donderdag 06-09-2007 om 15:58:00 | |
Thanx for the great feedback! Finns should really learn how to comment on music from u guys! Yup TLP I'll check your music and hit u back with some feedback! |
JayGreen |
Gepost door JayGreen op zondag 09-09-2007 om 03:59:20 | |
Done sleepin! Get it crackin people, let me feel it! |
JayGreen |
Gepost door JayGreen op dinsdag 11-09-2007 om 18:11:31 | |
Anyone? |
JayGreen |
Gepost door JayGreen op vrijdag 14-09-2007 om 15:24:53 | |
Up for one last time! Thanx errbody for the feedback, there's more to come! Stay tuned!
Peaz, -J |
WilleWa JK |
Gepost door WilleWa op vrijdag 14-09-2007 om 15:59:26 | |
Nice shit! ur flow is very nice and u got some pretty good quallity..
I have a friend in Finland, in Suomussalmi... I know some other finnish rappers... steen christensen, rocking da north.. other names I can't remember .. do you have the track
Rocking da North - Neckbone (feat RZA, Cilvaringz, Ganz & Jonaveli ja Elastinen) that's a sick track but somehow it doesn't work anymore at my computer and I can't find it anywhere...
anduhh.. mälli sun naamalles vittu perkele .. or something like that :')
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JayGreen |
Gepost door JayGreen op zondag 16-09-2007 om 23:31:19 | |
Thanx WilleWa! Glad that u like it! Nah Im sorry I don't have that track, I think I've heard it but I never really got into that whole Rockin da north thing.. not my cup of tea... Still somebody who wants to drop a comment? |
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