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 Gepost door acida op woensdag 08-10-2003 om 19:26:35 |  |
An abhorrent content, warrant scents in every direction
leaving humans hooked horribly, on hormone injections
the addicted mutates to monstrosities, unnaturally formed
to stampeding gorgons, attatched with superb olfactory organs
trailing through cosmos to flabbergast unknowing warrens
with magic, intoxicating madness and exhilarating sadness
paragons of badness, these creatures keep on aggravating
while annhilating causless, the abominations start dissolving
cocooning thoughtless in walls of deeds unworthy of absolving
emerging wrought in weakness, their powers all but depleted
suddenly ambushed by brave warriors, slain and thus defeated
unneeded lust for might suddenly shine bright like sunlight
among armored assaulters such thoughts is shun like the blight
but brass bedazzelment overcomes reluctance like bravery
and suddenly shrill screams sally, grapple gadgets start grasping
new tyrants come, carrying cataclysmic means of slavery
savoring degradation and death, germination of digress
the oppression eliminated, but revolutionists still have a guild
survival? yes, because behind backstabbers blood is never spilled
Whatcha think?
Peace |
N8
Roy wears Casio watches! Be like Roy, wear Casio! |
Gepost door N8 op donderdag 09-10-2003 om 09:52:45 | |
Sounds like you've taken a little too much Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds! 
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take the baton, drop it on to the head,
and now she's dead
killin' baby seals, keepin' it real
you wanna chew the beef, but you'd rather chew the veal
coz killin' babies, for you has mass appeal |
| acida |
Gepost door acida op donderdag 09-10-2003 om 12:13:55 | |
Ha ha... How'd ya know? What gave me away?  |
(b)randy
Hasta La Victoria Siempre |
Gepost door (b)randy op donderdag 09-10-2003 om 16:05:28 | |
Nice rhyme Acida
word...
nice vocab en dope flow
ive read your other post and if you want to post rhyme's for feedback
i reccommend you 2 check out www.theboombap.nl
dutch site also , still alot of english lyrics are being spitt
p's
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alles staat met mekaar in verband
onopgemerkt ,je loopt rond met een illusie als verstand |
| acida |
Gepost door acida op donderdag 09-10-2003 om 17:36:56 | |
| Thanks, dawg... I'll check it out... |
N8
Roy wears Casio watches! Be like Roy, wear Casio! |
Gepost door N8 op donderdag 09-10-2003 om 19:12:42 | |
Quote: acida schreef op 09-10-2003 @ 12:13:55
Ha ha... How'd ya know? What gave me away?
I don't rightly know... maybe it's just the name acida 
the rhyme is ok, but heavy on the brain and seems a challenging rhyme to rap
It reminds me of Chemical Calisthenics by Blackalicious somehow
keep up the good work!
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take the baton, drop it on to the head,
and now she's dead
killin' baby seals, keepin' it real
you wanna chew the beef, but you'd rather chew the veal
coz killin' babies, for you has mass appeal |
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