recentelijk geschreve peeps, advies en mening gewaardeerd 
to put it simply i'm beyond the bounderies of outerspace,
like chains and bounds cut loose from my wrists and fade away,,
i'm thinking instinct, my pen writes my paper for just this space today,,
and after sobering up, it stays away,, for then to return whem i'm sparking this L,,
eyes low and red like we're feeling the ashes, a glimpse of hell,,
we're empty shells,, like we're the fallen ashes of this spliff,,
get high like the smoke we become, this joint's a star that's lit,,
and you know these bars'll hit,, when you look into the mirror to check your eye,,
cuz the last one is a puff from the filter, and with the exhale it will die,,
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je moet je rijmwoorden niet in bold zetten. dat staat nogal denigerend tegenover de lezer. of je moet hele hi-tech rijmschema's gebruiken.
tekst vind ik niet zo bijzonder, niet echt hele toffe rijm en het onderwerp spreekt mij niet echt aan. maar tof dat je shit in het engels post, weinig mensen doen dat.
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Ah, the Canibus Era, when men were men and rappers were nuclear warheads with twin lyrical Pentium chips. Lyrically.
-soul khan |